Tuesday, March 8, 2011

Purpose voice audience! group 1 love paul and jordan

"To inform students, faculty, alums, parents basically everyone who wants to know what we as a community are doing for two weeks in March. Our goals are to inform every one of the various activities and to show even the little things that happen. Also the fun of the winterims and to advertize what winterim is and how we as a school use it to bond and to give back. Our work will be read by alum, faculty, parents, students, grandparents, and even open to the general public to check out what we are doing. We are not allowed to bash people in a negative way but we mostly are trying to just show the positive and not as much of the negative by saying that if you don’t like your winterim activity at night there is no writing everyone hated there night tonight. "Success is being able to do what you love every single day." says paul! It will be to have a lot of views by the end and also to have something that we are all proud of. Our voice will be funny but all telling the truth it will be a mellow more student writing not everything correct or anything like that but more sounding like a student."

5 comments:

  1. this is good i like it it makes sense

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  2. I agree with writing a little about each winterim that way people will come back looking for more information about each winterim

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  3. I agree in general, but to specify we should pay great attention to the sport news of school, because LA is a sport academy, therefore such new will find not only people who are interested in new from their own team, but also people from other schools.

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  4. this is good, add new students to that list though

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